Monday, June 3, 2013

marginal comments so far

- "(argh)"

- "(that is like pseudo-Woolfian)"

- "if Charlotte could keep writing after her two remaining sisters DIED, you can write through a headache"

- "more tea is needed"


Darling so far (darlings! already!): "He smiled again -- a Gatsby smile, which made you aware of just how handsome he was and how completely his attention was focused on you."

904 words! ....OMG stuck. Also, headache.